I think reflective writing can help student to become a better writer ,because students can spend more time to organize instead of just writing without planning. Take myself as an example, In writing project 3, I make a plan about how to write a good essay to my audiences. First of all, I think about the nature of writing. What is writing . Writing is is a process to improve my observation ability, communicate skills, and thinking. Next, I write my struggles about writing. For example, How to quote correctly.
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In writing project 2, the most challenge thing is data collect. I find several people in my college and ask them. They give me different ideas. Some people think social media is more harm than good, while others think not. Also, It’s really difficult to find online resources. I check different website and pick useful resources. However, I conquer the problems and finish the project. In project 1, I forgot cite, which lower my score. I didn’t do the same thing in project 2. I like this project, because it improve me writing skills.
Formatting is always one of important part in writing process. Without format, your essay will be messed. For example, I still remember the first time I wrote my essay, and I didn’t use correct format, which hard to connect my essay. As a result, I got very low grade on my essay, because I didn't use correct format.However, I use APA and MLA format now in my writing.
In the peer review, There are three students give me comments. I think their comments are really helpful for me to improve my essay. For example, “-Overall its great, a small improvement can be to briefly explain why you added those pictures. They stand out on their own and a reader can clearly see the connection by reading your essay but just a small explanation as to why you added them wouldn't hurt.” From students two. Thanks for him, I know what’s problem is and I will correct it immediately. I love discussion part, because I can talk with other people. Take myself as an example. Before I write my essay, I go to discussion part to find ideas.
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1. What do you think about social media? Answer: Well, I think social media is kind of tool for people to use. I usually use it to relax myself. For example, video game, watch news, and communicate with my friends. 2. Some people think Social media has negative influence to people. What’s your opinion? Answers: I think social media is good for people, because it can make people’s life more convenient. How? Answers: I’m a college student. In my college, teacher always put the homework online. Student can check online and finish the homework. I think is good, because we don’t need paper. So you think is environmentally friendly? Answers: Yes. Today, I go to Farmer boys. The restaurant is ranch style. For example, the table is made by wood. there is a picture on the wall. In that picture, I can see the story about farmer boys. The music is traditional music, which is very suitable for Farmer boys. Also, The food smelled appetizing. I ordered The NO.1 burger-- The Natural Avocado Bacon Cheeseburger combo. The cashier is a young girl, who has a brown hair. She looks tired. I wait for 15 minutes. When the waiter give me the food, I feel strong sense of happiness. I pick up the burger and bite it. In that moment, the world is stopped. It’s so delicious and I can’t stop. People are smiling, talking their daily life.
Justin, a boy who comes form New Jersey, USA, is my observation target. The reason why I choose him is because his bedroom attract me. In this picture, I can see four trophy, football equipment, and sports style room. I know that Justin like sports very much, especially football. His eyes are telling me that he is a strong boy and he has no fear on anything. He is a black man, because of his skin. Most Black man good at sport.
My topic is “ Does social media Harm Than good?” In my college, Professor will use an app software called “ Top Hat” to publish test question and test material. It is very convenient for professor and students because there are over 500 students in one lecture, which is difficult for professor to pass paper material. In writing project 2, I want to do research online and interview the students in my college to prove my idea--Social media is both positive and negative. Everyone is allowed in this space, because social media is for everyone on this world.
In my friend-circle, I am a kind of leader. I will give advice to my friends and help them to access their goal. For example, Last time, me and my friends are talking about Math question. They don’t know how to solve it, and the final test is coming. I teach them one by one and help them passed the test successfully. Also, I can make friend very easy. However, there are some places I can’t participate such as female’s space. I’m little bit shy when I talk to the female friends. In the public space and places, I’m a student from UCR college. My first mission is to learn knowledge and use it in the future.
In the writing project 1, the challenge for is choose a topic. The writing project 1 require me to write a autobiography. I just don’t know how to choose a element to write. For example, I don’t know what is the different culture conflict. We need to write 1 conflict in our project. In this situation, I found the answer in discussion session and peer review session, which helps me conquer this problem. It’s really nice that I can learn the concept about autobiography. I believe in the future, I will use it again.
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